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We both have something missing!

The Present The boy was playing on his Xbox 360, when his mother came through the door and put down a brown box in his eye line. Curiosity got the better of him, so he opened the box and BOOM out I came. As soon as he saw me he said, “AWWWWWW!” However he realised […]

The Present

A story with a real ‘twist in the tale’. Can you work it out before all is revealed?

Health inspector, Dead inspector

  Health Inspector, Dead inspector Barging through the front door, the health inspector spied a corner table. He gestured towards me and I nodded him a silent reply. The health inspector arrogantly sat down and eagerly he picked up the plastic menu. He looked at this with an eagle-eye. He looked up, caught my eye […]

Murder At The Spag Bol

Barging through the front door, the inspector quickly pounced in to the seat at the corner table. Next the inspector ordered a small lasagne and one small portion of spaghetti Bolognaise  [Because it was the house speciality] . Studying the two meals, in the lasagna  he noticed a small blue plaster but it just got […]

Road’s End

Have a look at the mystery story below… Can you work out what is going on? Year 5 Children have been recreating this video in story form using good sentence openers… what do you think? Users who have LIKED this post:

23 degrees and 5 minutes

Using the attached video, we worked with fronted adverbials to develop a sense of atmosphere… what do you think? Users who have LIKED this post: